Mind Stealer

like a deer driven from the woods to the city - thief of thoughts fears all








Won first place in A thief who Steals your thoughts Poetry Contest sponsored by Bobby May
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Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:41 PM
'Thief of thoughts' -- brilliant, Jenish! Congrats on your first place win and Happy 2020! Warm wishes, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 9:15 PM
Thank you Gershon.. Happy New Year..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 7:50 AM
Wow! Congrats!
Somadas Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Kim
Messina Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Great one, Jenish. Nice take on the contest. Congrats on your win!
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Thank you Charles..
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations for the win, Jenish. I really enjoyed yours.
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Thank you Andrea..
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December 30, 2019 at 3:44 PM
I guess it's like what you don't know makes you wonder. Nicely done.
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 9:05 PM
A stealer fears his reader.. He don't know who read the original.. Thanks..
Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 12:35 PM
- A brilliant line for this contest, Jenish:) - Congratulations on your win :) - Happy New Year 2010 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Thank you..But you 10 years late..lol...Happy New Year 2020..
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on a fine win. I enjoyed your original take on the theme. Blessings for 2020. Also thanks for your kind comment.
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Richard.. Happy New Year..
Canerdy Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 9:29 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this thought-provoking one liner, Jenish. Janice
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Janice..
Proxenos Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Always looking over their shoulder - great Monoku congratulations on your win Jenish. Blessings, Jennifer.
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Yes.. Thank you Jennifer..
Adams Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:58 AM
love the way you expressed this... wonderfully penned...congratulations on your win :)
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:37 AM
Thank you Sandra..
Neumann Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:39 AM
Very nice. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Somadas Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:22 AM
Thank you Kai..
Agustin Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:25 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this: a prudent warning poetically expressed. God bless you.
Somadas Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:44 PM
Thank you Beata..
Wolf Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:54 PM
Hey, Congrats to you on your #1 placement in Bobby's contest. ~ Deerslayer
Somadas Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:04 PM
Congrats for you also.. We will share the seat.. This is the first time I got first in a poetry contest.. I'm in cloud 9..
Roper Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 5:03 PM
Nice monoku, Jenish, good luck in the contest. Hugs eve
Somadas Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 11:02 PM
Thank you Eve..
Ligon Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 3:46 PM
Great picture! Best wishes.
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December 29, 2019 at 11:02 PM
Thank you Juliet..
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Great one liner--nicely done, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Thank you Vijay..
One Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 6:41 AM
you did this very well.. great one liner.
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December 29, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Thank you..
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