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Mind Stealer

like a deer driven from the woods to the city - thief of thoughts fears all Won first place in A thief who Steals your thoughts Poetry Contest sponsored by Bobby May

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/1/2020 1:41:00 PM

'Thief of thoughts' -- brilliant, Jenish! Congrats on your first place win and Happy 2020! Warm wishes, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/1/2020 9:15:00 PM

Thank you Gershon.. Happy New Year..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2019 7:50:00 AM

Wow! Congrats!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/31/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Kim

Charles Messina

Date: 12/30/2019 6:36:00 PM

Great one, Jenish. Nice take on the contest. Congrats on your win!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 9:07:00 PM

Thank you Charles..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2019 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations for the win, Jenish. I really enjoyed yours.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Bette Bavington

Date: 12/30/2019 3:44:00 PM

I guess it's like what you don't know makes you wonder. Nicely done.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 9:05:00 PM

A stealer fears his reader.. He don't know who read the original.. Thanks..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2019 12:35:00 PM

- A brilliant line for this contest, Jenish:) - Congratulations on your win :) - Happy New Year 2010 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 1:05:00 PM

Thank you..But you 10 years late..lol...Happy New Year 2020..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/30/2019 9:45:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win. I enjoyed your original take on the theme. Blessings for 2020. Also thanks for your kind comment.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Richard.. Happy New Year..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/30/2019 9:29:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this thought-provoking one liner, Jenish. Janice

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Janice..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/30/2019 6:45:00 AM

Always looking over their shoulder - great Monoku congratulations on your win Jenish. Blessings, Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 6:54:00 AM

Yes.. Thank you Jennifer..

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/30/2019 5:58:00 AM

love the way you expressed this... wonderfully penned...congratulations on your win :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Sandra..

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/30/2019 4:39:00 AM

Very nice. Congratulations on your win, Kai

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/30/2019 5:22:00 AM

Thank you Kai..

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/29/2019 11:25:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this: a prudent warning poetically expressed. God bless you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 11:44:00 PM

Thank you Beata..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/29/2019 9:54:00 PM

Hey, Congrats to you on your #1 placement in Bobby's contest. ~ Deerslayer

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 11:04:00 PM

Congrats for you also.. We will share the seat.. This is the first time I got first in a poetry contest.. I'm in cloud 9..

Eve Roper

Date: 12/29/2019 5:03:00 PM

Nice monoku, Jenish, good luck in the contest. Hugs eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 11:02:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/29/2019 3:46:00 PM

Great picture! Best wishes.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 11:02:00 PM

Thank you Juliet..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/29/2019 7:12:00 AM

Great one liner--nicely done, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2019 6:41:00 AM

you did this very well.. great one liner.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/29/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thank you..