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Mind Game

heavy confused dreams filled my night with restlessness subconsciously awake endlessly the mind wonders every thought held as captive unrelenting fear the mind takes over grandmaster of illusion and I the pawn of the game a mental torture I mount my attack, countered I awake, checkmate

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/5/2011 6:34:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, clever description of a restless night, I think we've all had a night like this!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2011 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Lori. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/3/2011 1:45:00 AM

you played on my mind as I read this poem.. Congratsss, lorii... :)

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/2/2011 2:42:00 PM

Nice work with the form and great job with the topic(s) :) Thanks so much for the write and for supporting my contest! Beauty day, Namaste~N

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/23/2011 5:50:00 PM

Really enjoyed the journey you have taken here Lori, very open to interpretation..very well done.!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2011 2:38:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in Francine's contest..Sure winner...Sara

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/20/2011 5:11:00 PM

Love your approach to this contest and form. This is truly a remarkable write on the Mind "grandmaster of illusion", and you the "pawn of the game". Beautiful details and imagery to an magnificent poem!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/20/2011 11:13:00 AM

Hi! my new friend, I have enjoyed your write. You have penned well your thought. I am touched with the lines 'the mind takes......of the game' and 'a mental .......checkmate'. Thanks for sharing. bl