Mind Do You Hear Me

she meddles me mad
doing what I do not want
mind do you hear me

2-Feb-2020
Senryu On Mind Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Interesting, Sathya! Congrats!
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:14 AM
- Congratulations on a wonderful 1st place in the contest, Sathya :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 3:16 PM
I hate when my mind won't TURN OFF. yes, it is maddening especially for insomniacs!! Congrats on the win.
Babu Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) Regards, Sathya
Somadas Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 12:01 AM
Beauty of simplicity.. Congrats on your great win in the contest Sathya..
Babu Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Thank You Jenish. Regards, Sathya
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