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Mind Bandit

How can you be so cruel to play us both for fools? You’ve been with us for years watching through our tears. I’ll bet you’re happy now. Why don’t you take a bow? You’ve taken something good – you always knew you could. Do you plan to see it through – will you give us what is due? If you stay until the end, you might become a friend. He’s asking now to die. You know the reason why. Come revel in my grief – give him a little peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/27/2013 10:27:00 AM
Thomas ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:22:00 AM
Hey Thomas, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thomas, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2013 7:44:00 AM
hi Thomas, interesting write. great ending , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Thomas ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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