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Mind aflame bow

Mind aflame, bow in bruised rivers, shattered glass starts to rise, watching frozen time as shivers, swimming in empty skies. Silky thoughts are turning, ancient bridges burning, awareness is yearning. Drifts upward now, Mind aflame bow.
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Guptar Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 12:08 AM
Congratulations, dearpoet, on your top win in this contest with a lovely poem. Particularly appreciated the first stanza which is mind-blowing. Wishing you a bright day.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 12:42 AM
My heartfelt thanks for your shared sentiments, as well as the highlighted portion, my friend.
Godwin Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 4:08 AM
Lovely, striking imagery. Congratulations on your win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 11:06 PM
Thanks, CayCay, greatly appreciated.
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