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Hello , what a nice day ,It seems perfect in every way.
          The clear blue sky with  those popcorn clouds is something to celebrate.

And the view of the valley is quite amazing really, the stream,the grass,and the trees.

And the air is so crisp and fresh ,it smells so good to me. 

 Being here makes me want to stay and take this all in.

Oh, I'm sorry, what's your name again?

6/17/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 17, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Hi Jack E, an awesome rant. Skat
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June 18, 2016 at 3:15 AM
Thank you Skat.
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June 17, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Er, Jack, you seem a little distracted…just kidding, nice nature poem!:)
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June 17, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Thank you Er Your name again? Haha
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