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Minacia

Dismentaling the menace very discreetly, the matchmakers walked over the hurricane to bring back showers. Unreachable, moon was smiling in the blue sky. The maidens were busy in observing a fast to get a muse. A million stars went on counting the sins. Innocent milk will fill up the breasts of waiting mothers whose children were coming back from the front. The shadows were changing with weather. Inertia of dust turns into a sculptor, with eyesless sight. A mask falls from a reclining god. Satish Verma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2010 11:31:00 AM
You are standing back from something, painfully....
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:25:00 AM
You have excellent use of words that create imagery and and thoughtful responses from a reader. Excellent, Satish. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/24/2010 7:05:00 AM
WOW... Intense poem... Good job my friend....:JP]
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:38:00 AM
What is Minacia? This is very intriguing if not a little unsettling. It reminds me of a Plath Poem. Milk for the soldiers? It's too deep for me.
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