Millipede

She's a black cigar
when i touch her crawling body
she curls, like my fist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 10, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Another good haiku.May I request you to read my haiku:)
Masido Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 4:16 PM
:) glad you liked it kash.i will definitely read you poetry!
Sherman Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 7:28 AM
Congrats on a featured piece this week. Valerie
Austin Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Congrats on this superb creepy crawly being selected. daver
Masido Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 2:48 AM
thanks alot daver.
Fisher Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week rgds Janette
Masido Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 2:49 AM
i was so honored to have it featured! thanks Janette.
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your well deserving poem being featured this week Hellen. Love, Carol
Masido Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 2:50 AM
thanks too for your positive reply n for reading my poems. it means alot! Cheers!
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