Million Dollar View

Earth's grace
From space

15 Aug 2015 
Footle Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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H. Chouhdry Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Well written.Enjoyed the plot and SHORT Scheme.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 11:56 AM
I see you changed it. I wonder if you did it too late since the contest has been judged now. I really like it with the change now.
Mohn Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 12:13 PM
Thanks...looks like I was too late though she had a pretty small number of winners so I may not have made the cut regardless..thanks for the help and congrats on your entry...very cute
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 9:40 PM
David this is very nice. but your second syllable of each line has to rhyme together!
Mohn Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thanks for the info Andrea & happy 39th anniversary :)
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Beautiful thought, david
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 4:38 PM
That would be an awesome sight to see! :)
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:18 PM
excellent footle - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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