Milky Way

Milky way --
one by one fireflies
up the hill

August 7, 2014
 
#1, Haiku "Aha" Moment contest
 
Regina Riddle, sponsor
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Gibson Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations on a great first place win!
Nance Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Grats on your beautiful win;)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Just returning to congratulate you on your great win! Pandita
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:57 PM
wow, right on the dot... huge congrats!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:30 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Mandani Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Like a dream. Good imagination!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on top place win Archana on this lovely haiku!
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:50 AM
Thanks so much dear Upma!
Chutani Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:32 AM
nice one, Archana. Congrats.
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:50 AM
Thanks dear friend.
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Beautiful images, Archana. congrats on a great win
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Thanks!
Glenister Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Wow..this is brilliant and the last line just crunches it. Congratulations
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Thanks Craig!
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:41 PM
beautiful image. Congrats for your win.
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:51 AM
I am very thankful for your wishes.
Walker  Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:27 PM
Lovely Archana. Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Thanks dear Verlena
Mehta Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful imagery creating a lovely picture, Archana
Nagpal Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Thanks. I am happy you liked the images!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Beautiful write with amazing imagery. Well done, Archana!
Nagpal Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Thanks dear friend.
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