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Milky Shade of Tears

Her eyes, a beautiful green, carries tears Milky shade of tears are expounded on She has wisdom within her eyes of years Her eyes, a beautiful green, carries tears Time hasn’t been on her side, I do fear Each tear falls until there is only one Her eyes, a beautiful green, carries tears Milky shade of tears are expounded on Russell Sivey

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2013 10:44:00 AM

Good morning Russell, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2013 10:50:00 PM

I can imagine these pretty eyes filled with tears waiting to spill!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2013 6:25:00 AM

Great descriptive work..This sad elderly green eyed lady of whom you speak must be facing so very trying situation..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..I just had a v8(in the captcha)...

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/27/2013 8:58:00 PM

Russell; this is very tenderly written. Milky shade tears - I like that. Thanks so much for pointing out my mistake. you are a good friend. I fixed it. lucilla