Russell Sivey Poet Triolet

Milky Shade of Tears

Her eyes, a beautiful green, carries tears
Milky shade of tears are expounded on
She has wisdom within her eyes of years
Her eyes, a beautiful green, carries tears
Time hasn’t been on her side, I do fear
Each tear falls until there is only one
Her eyes, a beautiful green, carries tears
Milky shade of tears are expounded on

Russell Sivey

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Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2013 at 10:44 AM Good morning Russell, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2013 at 10:50 PM I can imagine these pretty eyes filled with tears waiting to spill!!

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2013 at 6:25 AM Great descriptive work..This sad elderly green eyed lady of whom you speak must be facing so very trying situation..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..I just had a v8(in the captcha)...

Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2013 at 8:58 PM Russell; this is very tenderly written. Milky shade tears - I like that. Thanks so much for pointing out my mistake. you are a good friend. I fixed it. lucilla