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Miles of Wishes

Empty footprints in the snow, leave me wishing you are here The miles feel so far right now, as you are not near Cold air nips my face, as gray skies lay so far away But there above me, blue skies find an open place to stay Scattered with wisps of clouds, the snow no longer falls Just what’s left beneath my feet and all these thoughts that flow The wishes you could know, all that I hold on tight inside Especially for you, as my heart continues to hide Maybe you will see these clouds, float by where you are And then you’ll see my wishes, with the next shooting star Heidi Sands 12/4/19

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Date: 12/5/2019 5:23:00 AM
You captured me with "empty footprints in the snow" - to end with "next shooting star" was indeed brilliant, Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/5/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren. I just noticed your comment now. Thank you :)
Date: 12/5/2019 5:00:00 AM
Very romantic. Excellent imagery dearest , Heidi
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. I was late seeing your comment :)
Date: 12/4/2019 5:38:00 PM
Love the "Miles of wishes"; I can feel the energy of the racing pulse.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/4/2019 8:02:00 PM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 12/4/2019 5:33:00 PM
Wonderful item you brought to the readers heart. Thanks for sharing this
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/4/2019 8:02:00 PM
Thank you. That is nice to hear :)
Date: 12/4/2019 3:28:00 PM
Oh this is beautiful. I have already read it a few times. It just melts my heart. Love this one Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/4/2019 5:03:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that. Have a nice evening :)
Date: 12/4/2019 2:22:00 PM
Loved this poem Heidi. It just makes the reader want to smile. Love does that to people. Beautifully written my friend
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/4/2019 2:38:00 PM
Happy to hear you love this one Chris. Yes, it does. I hope your day is going well :)

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