Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Miles of Wishes

Empty footprints in the snow, leave me wishing you are here
The miles feel so far right now, as you are not near
Cold air nips my face, as gray skies lay so far away
But there above me, blue skies find an open place to stay
Scattered with wisps of clouds, the snow no longer falls
Just what’s left beneath my feet and all these thoughts that flow
The wishes you could know, all that I hold on tight inside
Especially for you, as my heart continues to hide
Maybe you will see these clouds, float by where you are
And then you’ll see my wishes, with the next shooting star

Heidi Sands

12/4/19

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Caren Krutsinger December 5, 2019 at 5:23 AM You captured me with "empty footprints in the snow" - to end with "next shooting star" was indeed brilliant, Heidi Heidi Sands December 5, 2019 at 7:44 PM Thank you so much Caren. I just noticed your comment now. Thank you :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 5, 2019 at 5:00 AM Very romantic. Excellent imagery dearest , Heidi Heidi Sands December 5, 2019 at 7:43 PM Thank you Demetrios. I was late seeing your comment :)

M. L. Kiser December 4, 2019 at 5:38 PM Love the "Miles of wishes"; I can feel the energy of the racing pulse. Heidi Sands December 4, 2019 at 8:02 PM Thank you M.L. :)

Na Na December 4, 2019 at 5:33 PM Wonderful item you brought to the readers heart. Thanks for sharing this Heidi Sands December 4, 2019 at 8:02 PM Thank you. That is nice to hear :)

Midnight Aurora December 4, 2019 at 3:28 PM Oh this is beautiful. I have already read it a few times. It just melts my heart. Love this one Heidi. Heidi Sands December 4, 2019 at 5:03 PM Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that. Have a nice evening :)

Chris Green December 4, 2019 at 2:22 PM Loved this poem Heidi. It just makes the reader want to smile. Love does that to people. Beautifully written my friend Heidi Sands December 4, 2019 at 2:38 PM Happy to hear you love this one Chris. Yes, it does. I hope your day is going well :)