Miles Ahead

Run away today
With me, and I promise you
We'll never look back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lane Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 6:25 PM
Few words but they mean everything! Perfect words...Take care
Collins Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 9:00 AM
I'm coming with you
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 9:29 PM
The title of my favourite Miles Davis CD... but, I digress! Connectivity and grammar are so important (to me) in a well constructed HAIKU. Simple words which flow so smoothly, and make sense! BRAVO Annie!! :)
Palmer Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 6:41 PM
take your lab top,gonna still be wanting to read your poems,lol,Annie,nice thought
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Annie do not run away....lol.... - well done Haiku - oxox Anne-Lise
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