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this poem was published at creativeramblings.com/poetry/archives-2-32/#comment-8452, August 16, 2026
two geese wait, pond holding its stillness~ season turns, softly calling. grass stirs with what’s coming next. on a nearby bench, screens glow faintly; the moment passes on.
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