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Mighty Force

What a mighty force is flood water Coursing on its way to the sea Forcing ones way backward impossibility Carried away in the flow easiest to be What about you and what about me What will our course be this day What course will attraction drawing be Right, wrong, straddle the fence, play Decisions, decisions what choice today Help my eyes be focused on the prize The prize of the higher calling stay Stay focused don't ever become unwise

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Raj Nandy

Date: 8/18/2010 9:26:00 PM

Sara through your 'Mighty Force' you have given us good advice ! To stay focused on the 'higher callings of life' ! Thanks dear for your encouraging comments on my -'Church and the Graveyard' , written in 2008 and posted in 'poemhunter.com' . Best wishes , - Raj

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/18/2010 3:16:00 PM

i was just looking at the niagara falls too(: the image just fascinates me. 'stay focused don't ever become unwise'. . i like the quote. such force.~Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/18/2010 2:23:00 PM

Awesome beautiful write Sara.. water is powerful and precious commodity to us all.. its force and beauty is both good and destructive at times.. but always useful.. enjoyed .. please let me know your son's first name .. the prayer chain would like to specifically speak his name out loud when worshiping and praying for needs.. thankxx with luv from Italy..caio..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/18/2010 10:33:00 AM

Excellent rhyme that makes the reader want to carry you through the flood. Been praying for you and your son, Sara. Hope things are working out. Love, Carolyn

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/18/2010 10:02:00 AM

good write. enjoyed the read.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/18/2010 6:53:00 AM

great advice...focus is a corporate motto these days.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/18/2010 5:33:00 AM

Sara, great uplifting write.. Blessings to you, love Wilma

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/18/2010 5:23:00 AM

Decisions, decisions what choice today I made the choice to comment on this fine write..keep it up Sara...TAH