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Mighty Clouds

Pure white as cotton in the sky, 
                                        Heal our weary souls just by looking up,
                                             Spell a magic in my heart and I fly,
                                  Oh mighty clouds.....walls of heaven from atop,
                                      Amazing view as God created from above.




                                         For Barbara Gorelick's "Clouds" contest

Copyright © Bukang Liwayway | Year Posted 2013

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Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/19/2013 3:07:00 AM Excellent. Nature's beauty. Lovely write. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/18/2013 1:22:00 AM beautiful maria, so visual Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2013 11:38:00 AM very nice, Maria, and putting them as walls atop heaven! Login to Reply

Christine Phillips Date: 8/17/2013 8:58:00 AM Nice piece. The clouds are very powerful sometimes aren't they? they sometimes appear as human faces If you look closely at the sky. Consider placing three dot s (...) where you have five. That's part of the grammar rule. No more that three Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/17/2013 7:58:00 AM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It is very descriptive and emotive..Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/16/2013 2:46:00 PM truly a soulful write enriched by your lovely words, paz... greeat job..:) hugggs Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 10:48:00 AM - A magic and lovely poem, Maria. - Love it !!! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply