Bukang Liwayway Poet Quintain (English)

Mighty Clouds

Pure white as cotton in the sky, 
                                        Heal our weary souls just by looking up,
                                             Spell a magic in my heart and I fly,
                                  Oh mighty clouds.....walls of heaven from atop,
                                      Amazing view as God created from above.




                                         For Barbara Gorelick's "Clouds" contest

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Ravi Sathasivam August 19, 2013 at 3:07 AM Excellent. Nature's beauty. Lovely write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Harry Horsman August 18, 2013 at 1:22 AM beautiful maria, so visual

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2013 at 11:38 AM very nice, Maria, and putting them as walls atop heaven!

Christine Phillips August 17, 2013 at 8:58 AM Nice piece. The clouds are very powerful sometimes aren't they? they sometimes appear as human faces If you look closely at the sky. Consider placing three dot s (...) where you have five. That's part of the grammar rule. No more that three

Sara Kendrick August 17, 2013 at 7:58 AM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It is very descriptive and emotive..Sara

Nette Onclaud August 16, 2013 at 2:46 PM truly a soulful write enriched by your lovely words, paz... greeat job..:) hugggs

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2013 at 10:48 AM - A magic and lovely poem, Maria. - Love it !!! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)