Midwest Memory

perfect rows of corn
thoughts are evenly complete
dreams flirt in green skirts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Morris Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:09 AM
I love this poem. Well done, Tamra. Take care and enjoy your day. :-)
Sambourne Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 5:31 PM
Superb! Three lines that bridge a well fortified corn field and tempting flirtation. Excellent Haiku! First place in my book. Be well. Brian
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February 15, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Let’s go I love the simplicity return the love thanks
Gauthier Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 8:45 PM
Charming poem, Tamra.
Amato Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 2:46 AM
Thank you for your comment Line. Cheers, Tamra
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on placing 4th in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. I like your implied analogy between corn and life. Smiles, DAS-J
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 11:01 PM
Interesting Haiku. Sara
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 8:19 AM
I love the orginality of this wonderful haiku! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 4:35 AM
Tamra congratulations on placing in Brian's contest - God Bless, mj
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August 28, 2009 at 5:58 PM
Creative view in this poem. Congratulations on placing 4th in the contest. Way to go. Keep on writing. Karen
Augustus Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Wow! I love your picture of fall! Everyone doesn't get these images and I like that you entered the contest with this one. I totally love the last line, as well as the title of your poem. Congratulations on your placement in this contest! I definitely see why!
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August 28, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Unique and beautiful write here, Tamra! Congrats on your win! Donna
Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations for your win in Brian's Images of Fall Contest Tamra. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 1:22 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Tamra.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened
Strand Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Tamra.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 9:59 PM
Nice work Tamara and thanks for your Birthday wishes. Welcome to the soup, I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
Anderson Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 11:46 PM
very nice, indeed. how did i miss you!?! love your writing
Shahwan Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Ver beautiful.
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April 23, 2009 at 3:26 AM
Very nice Haiku. The midwest is so beauiful. Rows of corn, pastures with bison occassionally. I love to go there. You took me there this morning with your poem. Thank you.
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