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Midwest Memory

perfect rows of corn
thoughts are evenly complete
dreams flirt in green skirts

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Michelle Morris

Date: 1/8/2024 1:09:00 AM

I love this poem. Well done, Tamra. Take care and enjoy your day. :-)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/7/2024 5:31:00 PM

Superb! Three lines that bridge a well fortified corn field and tempting flirtation. Excellent Haiku! First place in my book. Be well. Brian

Jerry Swana

Date: 2/15/2023 12:36:00 PM

Let’s go I love the simplicity return the love thanks

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/5/2020 8:45:00 PM

Charming poem, Tamra.

Tamra Amato
Date: 3/6/2020 2:46:00 AM

Thank you for your comment Line. Cheers, Tamra

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 3:49:00 AM

Congratulations on placing 4th in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. I like your implied analogy between corn and life. Smiles, DAS-J

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2009 11:01:00 PM

Interesting Haiku. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2009 8:19:00 AM

I love the orginality of this wonderful haiku! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/30/2009 4:35:00 AM

Tamra congratulations on placing in Brian's contest - God Bless, mj

Date: 8/28/2009 5:58:00 PM

Creative view in this poem. Congratulations on placing 4th in the contest. Way to go. Keep on writing. Karen

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/28/2009 1:04:00 PM

Wow! I love your picture of fall! Everyone doesn't get these images and I like that you entered the contest with this one. I totally love the last line, as well as the title of your poem. Congratulations on your placement in this contest! I definitely see why!

Donna Golden

Date: 8/28/2009 11:35:00 AM

Unique and beautiful write here, Tamra! Congrats on your win! Donna

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/28/2009 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in Brian's Images of Fall Contest Tamra. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/28/2009 1:22:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Tamra.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened

Brian Strand

Date: 8/19/2009 11:29:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Tamra.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/27/2009 9:59:00 PM

Nice work Tamara and thanks for your Birthday wishes. Welcome to the soup, I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/25/2009 11:46:00 PM

very nice, indeed. how did i miss you!?! love your writing

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/23/2009 7:12:00 AM

Ver beautiful.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/23/2009 3:26:00 AM

Very nice Haiku. The midwest is so beauiful. Rows of corn, pastures with bison occassionally. I love to go there. You took me there this morning with your poem. Thank you.

Midwest Memory

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