JC Brul Poet Monoku

Midst Stormy Water

dive and swim into my eyes~ I will keep you anchored to my bosom





25 August 2020


Flirt With Me Contest
Judged:  8/26/2020 3:23:00 PM
Sponsored by: Bobby May
1ST PLACE

MON-O
Contest Judged:  11/14/2020 5:15:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
1ST Place

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Susan Ashley November 21, 2020 at 8:31 PM Oh, such passionate expression overflows the confines of a monoku with beautiful ease, JCB. I adore the rich romance and admire your poetic skill delivering such lush imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2020 at 2:03 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, JCB :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2020 at 2:56 PM this is sure a gem, JCB. BIG congrats.

John Watt November 14, 2020 at 5:48 PM Love your imagery and the romantic tone you created out of only 14 words. Congrats on your #1 win! ~ john

Sam Kauffman November 14, 2020 at 10:55 AM Congratulations JCB! There is such rich imagery and tender love "anchored" in your seventeen syllables. I love the lyrical movement and flow! Well done.

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2020 at 8:42 AM Creative way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara

Carol Mitra November 14, 2020 at 5:54 AM Ooh...I love this poem...great piece :)

Regina Mcintosh November 14, 2020 at 5:36 AM Lovely win and congrats friend. God bless you

V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 4:31 AM Wow..highly flirtatious..:-) Congratulations on your top win mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Rama Balasubramanian August 27, 2020 at 3:29 AM Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2020 at 2:49 AM - Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 12:25 AM A very refreshing touch, JCB, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Eve Roper August 26, 2020 at 7:14 PM Great Monoku, JCB, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

John Watt August 26, 2020 at 3:58 PM JCB, I like your maritime theme with dive/swim/anchor. Well done and congrats on your win! ~ John

Bobby May August 26, 2020 at 3:44 PM Congratulations on your placement JBC!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2020 at 12:53 AM ... sweet ... :) - best wishes in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)