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Midnight's Braid - El

woven into midnights braid
sunsets goodnight kiss charade
bowing low for curtain call
draped in heavens endless shawl
warmth exhaled in cooling rise
silent wings of butterflies
woven into midnights braid



©7/9/2021

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Paula Goldsmith

August 1, 2021 at 11:57 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Midnight's Braid - EL" is a creative story/write. "Love it" Have a blessed day with your win...............

Charles Messina

July 31, 2021 at 6:20 AM

Wonderfully written, John. Great rhythm and flow...Love the line "silent wings of butterflies" Congratulations on your winning poem! Charlie

Christuraj Alex

July 31, 2021 at 4:37 AM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!

Regina Mcintosh

July 17, 2021 at 4:39 AM

This is wonderful. I love every line. God bless you always and I hope you're a winner. Love, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

July 11, 2021 at 3:38 PM

this is just gorgeous, John!! Thanks for appreciating my poem even if you do not agree with me. Here is something I think everyone ought to see. It is from a reliable source, but I doubt anyone will even read it if I post it at FB: https://nworeport.me/2021/07/10/vaers-report-indicates-9000-experimental-covid-19-vaccine-related-deaths-a-2000-increase-in-one-week/