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midnight thunderstorm

Because death is the only thing that could have ever kept him from you. ~Ally Carter

     midnight thunderstorm
     the low rumble of thunder~
     our bed half empty
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:45 PM
the thunderstorm creates the perfect atmosphere for the loneliness...nicely done! hugs, Sara
Achara Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 8:04 PM
Yes it does. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 12:44 AM
- Powerful - Best wishes in the contest, Chetta :) - hugs
Achara Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Thank you.
Peranteau Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 7:06 PM
too sad dear poet...it stuck....much love
Achara Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Thank you.
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