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This poem written for and submitted to Hallowen Haiku contest at: haikuniverse.com/newsletter/halloween-call-for-submissions-2025/

MIDNIGHT TEETH

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ chocolate wrappers twist midnight teeth sink through bat-wing foil~ orange moon watches cold
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Gauthier Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 1:08 PM
With my fillings I cringe at the thought of biting through foil wrap.... a very autumn poem
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:06 AM
many thanks, Line!
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:11 PM
- Woow ... love this one, Sara ... "midnight teeth sink through bat-wing foil" ... excellent :) - hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:07 AM
thank you, Anne Lise, for visiting and comments, Texas hugs, Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Ménage a trois would have been deux, if not for that silver coin aloft—just you and your chocolat, au revoir.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:06 AM
chocolate rules! :-)
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