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Midnight Sun

Midnight sun erases The darkness Hidden in my soul For so long Forever hiding In emptiness Waiting for the light to shine Waiting for the path to clear Waiting for someone to hear Cries for help Crying tears Hiding fears Shedding layers Empty shell Living there Listening for a voice Calling my name Whispers echo In my ear Never relenting Pain in my heart Never to spare Reaching out To finally share Open my heart See what lives there Content To live Free to be honest me

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/10/2010 3:49:00 AM

The road we all need to travel on, discovering the real you, loved it Jodie, luv Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2010 3:41:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jodie. I wish you the best always. Always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/6/2010 11:04:00 PM

Good for you, Jodie. I like the end of your poem, it is very inspiring. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments n my featured poem. Caroline.

Laura Malmstrom

Date: 7/6/2010 12:59:00 PM

Excellent, simple and direct but conveying the journey to being onesself. -Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2010 12:49:00 PM

very upbeat and enjoyable write,, nice one...P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 12:43:00 PM

Nice write Jodie.. longing in your lines and it reads like a Narrative.. a story.. enjoyed ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. on vacation.. AlohA..