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Midnight Serenade

the moon at my window
   ~ love in the air



Ziket: a 2-line poem comprised of 5-8 syllables in 1st line, 5 syllables in 2nd line

AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 5:07 PM
I think that these zikets are going to not just replace haikus, but steamroll them into oblivion. Really great, Line! Light and Hope, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 6:11 AM
That would put an end to so much bickering over haiku rules ~
Gilmour Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Truly beautiful dear LIne ~ a special time. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much, Ann ~
Horne Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 4:08 AM
oh, so much said in such a short piece - I agree with Andrea, absolutely beautiful
Gauthier Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Jack ~ much appreciated
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Beautiful!
Gauthier Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated~
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