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Midnight Reflections

The moonlight dances Between the limbs on the pines To reach the clear lake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/26/2010 12:29:00 AM
Very easy to visualise. Great. I feel there is too much of "the" in the haiku. Other words would give greater impact.
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Date: 6/22/2010 2:59:00 AM
Very pretty visual- my Poetic Genius friend.
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:52:00 PM
Boy you really got a lock on these haiku's, Larry. Another great write. ...Ralph
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:24:00 PM
I really liked this one..Reads like an interesting place..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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