Midnight Reflections

The moonlight dances
Between the limbs on the pines
To reach the clear lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Holmes Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 12:29 AM
Very easy to visualise. Great. I feel there is too much of "the" in the haiku. Other words would give greater impact.
Green Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Very pretty visual- my Poetic Genius friend.
Taylor Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Boy you really got a lock on these haiku's, Larry. Another great write. ...Ralph
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:24 PM
I really liked this one..Reads like an interesting place..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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