Margaret Foster Poet Dizain

Midnight Pearl

When darkness decends in the long day's wake
Cool breezes waft and sigh a gentle sigh
The crescent moon her chosen course will take
To carve a pathway through the starlit sky
And midnight brings dreams of sweet days gone by

To fleeting a pearl, to fragile to last
Sweet days of delight and sheer youthful bliss
That purest of days in long distant past
The joy of first love, the thrill of first kiss
Is  lost back in time and dim foggy mist



Margaret Foster April 2012

Contest. Russel's " Midnight Pearl "

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2013 at 3:49 AM - I wish you and everyone you love a pleasant Christmas, Margaret !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll August 26, 2013 at 12:34 AM Hi Margaret, Lovely write with a melodic flow.. Ken..

Debbie Guzzi January 31, 2013 at 5:49 PM We miss you! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2013 at 9:12 PM Margarel, I am sorry to hear that you have not written lately. Please TRY, dear. Oh I can finally tell you what happened with this particular contest: Midnight Pearl. The sponsor of that contest , I guess his membership expired on him which means he could not get his contest judged. but I am sure he is a member again and doing new contests. Luv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2012 at 6:09 PM well, here is one i never saw and it was your last one of the year. Dear lady, sure wish you would come back to us. wishing you a merry xmas and I hope you are at least busy writing poems!!

Connie Gildersleeve November 22, 2012 at 6:30 AM Well written Dizain form. First love memories of years gone by. Thank you Margarte for sharing this lovely poem. Happy Holisays to you and yours, Connie

Debbie Guzzi November 19, 2012 at 7:20 AM Where have you been since April? I love this form and you do it well! Light & Love

Carol Eastman September 28, 2012 at 10:19 AM A good reminiss of days gone by.

Debbie Guzzi September 9, 2012 at 5:51 PM Lovely skilled use of the form. Light & Love

Kathryn Collins May 3, 2012 at 7:35 AM The greats are great. It's true. But what can compare to the baring of one's soul for days gone by? with great appreciation, love, Kathy

Martynas Valius April 21, 2012 at 7:18 AM total banality, what can I say, try try and try again with a writing and perhaps something will happen good. I would take some time of reading poetry of famous poets, like Dylan Thomas, Robert Frost etc if I were you.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2012 at 6:24 AM Thank you for this poem.... like it alot....well done Margaret. - Wish you good luck in contest, hope for a win! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise