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Midnight Moon

Midnight moon

watching over

the grave yard,

as a lonely racoon

searches for a late night

snack.


Written 5-14-11

happinessi do not know?

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Anne Rutherford

May 25, 2011 at 3:26 AM

Sad to think of the racoon being the only living thing in the grave yard. Good write. Anne

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2011 at 11:38 PM

James, this could maybe be haiku or tanka if you played with the lines a bit. It has that "feel" to it. Great atmosphere poem.

Neha Sharma

May 23, 2011 at 5:18 AM

simply beautiful....james

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 22, 2011 at 12:50 PM

You have worded beautiful images for a visual, James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 22, 2011 at 12:34 PM

eerie and intriguing lines with a lovely title and compelling imagery James.. very imaginative poetry luv..

Sara Kendrick

May 22, 2011 at 12:30 PM

I can see the scene..Very creative work..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in a contest..I will have to get up in the middle of the night and see if I can see those armadillos by moonlight and write one about them..Sara