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Midnight Bell

midnight bell... the short hand of my wall clock is missing © kash poet 2012 ===================== Placement:1st;(Feb.2012) Contest:Short Verse maxm. 10 lines Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/14/2012 7:48:00 PM

I shot an arrow into the air and where it lands I do not care. This is what popped into my silly mind. Huggs TLee

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/14/2012 7:46:00 PM

I shot an arrow into the air and when it lands I know not where. This is what popped into my silly mind. Huggs TLee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 9:14:00 PM

kash, did you ever read DAvid's poem in the Bite Me winners circle? You are mentioned!

Heather Ober

Date: 3/8/2012 12:00:00 PM

This is wonderful. It takes a deft mind indeed to create such a powerful impression with only a few short lines. Congrats on the win! (Also, thank you for your kind comment on my poem!)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/2/2012 10:24:00 PM

Congrats! I knew this would be a winner. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:09:00 PM

KASH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2012 9:40:00 PM

hey, Kashinath, waiting for your next poem. Please don't even bother to read the awful haiku I posted. soupmail.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/29/2012 4:04:00 PM

Well at least you know the hour..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Have you ever eaten Rutabaga?...Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/29/2012 2:58:00 PM

Good job, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win. Love, Kim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/29/2012 11:30:00 AM

you know, this can be entered in charles' contest, kashi... have more?? ... thanks for coming around; i have something again! :) huggs!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 2/29/2012 10:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the poetry contest. Keep it up!- JH

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 2/29/2012 3:16:00 AM

wow.. gr8... congrats on the win...`sashi

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/29/2012 12:25:00 AM

woohoo... another great win kashi buddy!... congrats with huggs!... viait my new piece!.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2012 6:50:00 PM

Congratulations with your well deserved win, my friend.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/28/2012 5:50:00 PM

Congrats, kash. Excellent, well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph

Jack Horne

Date: 2/28/2012 1:48:00 PM

I love this clever write, Kash

Broken Butterfly

Date: 2/28/2012 11:43:00 AM

Funny Kash, thanks for noticing my error on my paper poem, fixed it . . .

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2012 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2012 9:37:00 AM

an aweso,e picture painted Kash.. good luck in contest if so entered for Chaz.. luv..

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/28/2012 8:29:00 AM

hahaha, you right! :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2012 1:02:00 AM

again, a masterful rendition of advanced 'ku, kashi... your phrasing hits me fine!.. grrreat write ( 4pm).. i'm awake; knok on my page, lol..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 9:25:00 PM

hahaha, I would never have thought of that, Kashinath!!! I am really bad with things like that!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 9:12:00 PM

A curious picture for me. This wall clock without the short hand. So that bell is going to be necessary!! Kashinath, I didn't predict about movies this year because for the first time, I did not have a clear favorite. I am happy with the winner, however. The Artist is an amazing movie. But so were many of the other nominated movies!

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2012 7:28:00 PM

I can't help but laugh at this one!! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/27/2012 5:53:00 PM

A great haiku...so much said in so few words. Brilliant. Blessings, Rhonda