Midnight Bell

midnight bell...
the short hand of my wall clock
is missing


© kash poet 2012
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Placement:1st;(Feb.2012)

Contest:Short Verse maxm. 10 lines

Sponsor:Brian Strand
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Allen Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:48 PM
I shot an arrow into the air and where it lands I do not care. This is what popped into my silly mind. Huggs TLee
Allen Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:46 PM
I shot an arrow into the air and when it lands I know not where. This is what popped into my silly mind. Huggs TLee
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:14 PM
kash, did you ever read DAvid's poem in the Bite Me winners circle? You are mentioned!
Ober Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 12:00 PM
This is wonderful. It takes a deft mind indeed to create such a powerful impression with only a few short lines. Congrats on the win! (Also, thank you for your kind comment on my poem!)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:24 PM
Congrats! I knew this would be a winner. Blessings, Rhonda
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:09 PM
KASH... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Dietrich Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 9:40 PM
hey, Kashinath, waiting for your next poem. Please don't even bother to read the awful haiku I posted. soupmail.
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Well at least you know the hour..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Have you ever eaten Rutabaga?...Sara
Merryman Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Good job, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win. Love, Kim
Onclaud Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 11:30 AM
you know, this can be entered in charles' contest, kashi... have more?? ... thanks for coming around; i have something again! :) huggs!
J.T. Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 10:19 AM
Congrats on your win in the poetry contest. Keep it up!- JH
Prabhu Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 3:16 AM
wow.. gr8... congrats on the win...`sashi
Onclaud Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 12:25 AM
woohoo... another great win kashi buddy!... congrats with huggs!... viait my new piece!.. :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations with your well deserved win, my friend.
Taylor Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Congrats, kash. Excellent, well deserved win. Nice going. Ralph
Horne Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 1:48 PM
I love this clever write, Kash
Butterfly Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 11:43 AM
Funny Kash, thanks for noticing my error on my paper poem, fixed it . . .
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 9:37 AM
an aweso,e picture painted Kash.. good luck in contest if so entered for Chaz.. luv..
Minardi Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 8:29 AM
hahaha, you right! :D
Onclaud Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 1:02 AM
again, a masterful rendition of advanced 'ku, kashi... your phrasing hits me fine!.. grrreat write ( 4pm).. i'm awake; knok on my page, lol..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:25 PM
hahaha, I would never have thought of that, Kashinath!!! I am really bad with things like that!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:12 PM
A curious picture for me. This wall clock without the short hand. So that bell is going to be necessary!! Kashinath, I didn't predict about movies this year because for the first time, I did not have a clear favorite. I am happy with the winner, however. The Artist is an amazing movie. But so were many of the other nominated movies!
Richards Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 7:28 PM
I can't help but laugh at this one!! :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:53 PM
A great haiku...so much said in so few words. Brilliant. Blessings, Rhonda
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