Middle-Aged Rose

Soft-scented rose in well-forded dale
Your taut stem worn and stale
When sprinkled, buds barely swell
Wavering petals your waning sail

Your contantly, preened leaves have lost detail
Filed thorns no longer suitors assail
Bushy foliage twines your lagging tail
Succulent scent no more casts alluring spell

Fawning heat has turned rosy hue pale
Abundant nectar from your pods will no longer trail
When pollinating lips against your fertile tips flail
Tapping into your fruitless, barren cell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Love the rhyme, diction, imagery, and passion! Fantastic piece of work. Love it!
Culverhouse Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:36 AM
well written poem! enjoyed!
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Bushy foliage twines your lagging tail.. nice expression, Stephen
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