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Middle Age Riddle

MIDDLE AGE RIDDLE

middle-age riddle...
water splashes on my face 
...fountain of wrinkles.

4/24/2018

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Gershon Wolf

April 28, 2018 at 10:47 PM

What wrinkles? Who's middle-age? What fountain?....This poem is so cute I could pinch its cheeks. Honestly, I laughed out loud for a sec---and yet, it's still quite a serious, well-penned Haiku! So I'm going to call it a 'Lite-ku.'... Way to write, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

April 29, 2018 at 5:42 AM

I like that! Lite-ku! Thanks, Gershon! <3 Kim