Middle Age Riddle

MIDDLE AGE RIDDLE middle-age riddle... water splashes on my face ...fountain of wrinkles. 4/24/2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2018 10:47:00 PM

What wrinkles? Who's middle-age? What fountain?....This poem is so cute I could pinch its cheeks. Honestly, I laughed out loud for a sec---and yet, it's still quite a serious, well-penned Haiku! So I'm going to call it a 'Lite-ku.'... Way to write, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 5:42:00 AM

I like that! Lite-ku! Thanks, Gershon! <3 Kim

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/25/2018 11:27:00 AM

or maybe it's because the water washed off all of the skin lighteners and creams! in any case, enjoy the wrinkles, we all have them xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2018 12:20:00 PM

LOL! We sure do!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/24/2018 8:08:00 PM

The truth always looks great in a poem!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 10:01:00 PM