George Anos Poet Haiku

Midday Nap

At stark midday

           The guava tree's swishing leaves
   
Rustles my sleep


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- So I opened my soup and read a few poetry. It eased my mind back into warmth. And now 
I'm tired again, and more equipped to take on mid day dreams.

Salute to everyone here.... I'm glad to have found this amazing site!

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Michael Degenhardt October 14, 2008 at 5:28 AM It is a great site isn't it? Love the picture of the guava trees leaves. Excellent flow and lovely read. Michael

Brandee Augustus October 1, 2008 at 1:40 PM This is a very cool and breezy poem. It's the first haiku I've actually enjoyed.

September 28, 2008 at 10:27 AM Nice use of imagery. I like the way you use sound in this poem. Thank you for contributing you creativity to "Tidbits." This is the first time I've tried something like this. I am excited how it is growing, a tribute to so many talented writers at Poetry Soup. I'm glad to hear you feel that way too. Karen

Sharon Winter September 28, 2008 at 5:21 AM Such lovely, peaceful mood and imagery you have captured. Welcome to the soup. Love, Shar

James Foulk September 24, 2008 at 8:24 PM yes George welcome to soup this was a great write enjoyed .keep posting my friend.

Adell Foster September 24, 2008 at 6:10 AM Welcome to the soup George, this is a very good write and one can definitely identify with your comments as well. Thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Deneen White September 23, 2008 at 5:10 PM I hate being woken up form my slumber of sleep, I love my sleep, nice write, and thank you for your welcome comments, take care D-nyce

Heidie Buys September 21, 2008 at 8:17 AM Welcome to the soup, may you spend many happy hours here. Love the last line, very well written. Regards Heidie

Michael Jordan September 20, 2008 at 5:46 AM And we are blessed to have you here George - God Bless

Trudy Diane Rider September 19, 2008 at 11:48 PM I second your post script about this amazing site, George! This poem is peaceful, and thank you for your comments on my poem also.