Midday

Midday. A sea of sun
I’m looking for my shadow
Have I lost it?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 8:49 PM
I really dig this image. Congratulations!
Foster Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Congratulations on your success with this delightful verse. Well done...Margaret
Song Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Cute haiku..your shadow should return VERY soon...I imagine in just a few hours. Congrats on this win in a very competitive contest. Gwendolen
Guzzi Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 2:17 PM
interesting short verse..Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Upto Five" contest Betim. Love, Carol
Carlson Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 12:28 AM
ABSOLUTE GENIUS...I've fallen in love with your haiku prowess - Kyle
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:43 PM
wow, this is really interesting. Sea of sun. I love that!!
Mehta Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 10:04 AM
beautiful realistic visual with apt images, Betim
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