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Midday. A sea of sun I’m looking for my shadow Have I lost it?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/3/2011 8:49:00 PM
I really dig this image. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/28/2011 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this delightful verse. Well done...Margaret
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Date: 10/28/2011 2:57:00 PM
Cute haiku..your shadow should return VERY soon...I imagine in just a few hours. Congrats on this win in a very competitive contest. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/28/2011 2:17:00 PM
interesting short verse..Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/28/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Upto Five" contest Betim. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:28:00 AM
ABSOLUTE GENIUS...I've fallen in love with your haiku prowess - Kyle
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:43:00 PM
wow, this is really interesting. Sea of sun. I love that!!
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Date: 2/27/2011 10:04:00 AM
beautiful realistic visual with apt images, Betim
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