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Mid Summer In New York

The mercury reached 104 degrees farenheit today The masses swelter and it becomes difficult evne to walk down the street Yet the city lives on since New Yorkers always stand tall when it comes to emergencies A little sun cam't destroy "Baghdad on the Hudson" Children laugh and play as a man sells flavored ice Cars pass by in a dizzying display Workers lift up concrete to build our city A lone bird flying overhead looks down with pity at those that cannot fly Young lovers kiss under the azure sky Taxicabs race through the avenues Each statue of a famous man or woman gleams in the afternoon At the beaches swimmers dive under waves and try to avoice the rip tide which can overcome their resistance Let's rejoice We should be glad to live in a town with eight million others All taking in the joys of summer and chasing the urban dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/12/2011 6:10:00 PM
You bring the city alive Matthew, I vibrant description of the big apple that I enjoyed so much
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Date: 8/9/2011 8:39:00 PM
yes youhave the picture, on the rosey side LOL NOW do part two the seedy side? [Brooklyn gal here & Rockaway] Thanks for the nice comment! Light &Love
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:55:00 PM
A good visual poem. I ffelt like I was there.
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:07:00 PM
very descriptive images. i feel like i'm there and filled with summer happiness :)
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:00:00 PM
Well i guess you'd be a New Yorker then:) Matthew.. good to read the piece today.
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:23:00 PM
You are so in love with new york and poems like this one always capture your feelings so well. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:01:00 AM
A nicely written urban poem, describing well life and summertime in NY. WOW! 104 degrees!! Keep cool, Matthew. Sent you another soupmail, hope it's ok. Thanks for your comments on moontowncafe. Love and peace, Caroline.
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:32:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Matthew. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your amazing work. Love, Carol
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