Mickey's Luck

Scurrying about
From dark corner to corner
In shadows it hides

Seeking its breakfast
Finding crumbs along its way
It survives again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 10:31 AM
I'm a Tigger fan and I'd work for Mickey and Donald any day. You've got an imposter there, Michael. You aolso got a fun poem. Vince
Spence Sr Avatar
September 5, 2008 at 9:58 AM
This really sounds like the mouse. The one at Disney don't have to worry about the next meal. The images are quite vivid. Great job! ~Joseph
Kelly Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 9:38 AM
Clever double haiku , Michael .... Be careful , Mother Cat is NOT around .....
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August 31, 2008 at 5:38 PM
I like the active nature of this poem. Creative use of this short format. A person can't help but smile with the last line. Enjoyed this one. Karen
Buys Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 4:55 PM
Great visual poetry and well written. Well done. Regards Heidie
Winter Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 9:24 AM
Yes, and my two lazy cats could care less! This was cute Michael. Usually find one when the cold weather sets in. Yuck. : ) Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
August 30, 2008 at 9:09 AM
Yup, those critters eat better than some - little stinkers! Made to survive! Great haiku set, love Kristin
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