Mickey's Luck

Scurrying about From dark corner to corner In shadows it hides Seeking its breakfast Finding crumbs along its way It survives again

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Date: 9/10/2008 10:31:00 AM

I'm a Tigger fan and I'd work for Mickey and Donald any day. You've got an imposter there, Michael. You aolso got a fun poem. Vince

Date: 9/5/2008 9:58:00 AM

This really sounds like the mouse. The one at Disney don't have to worry about the next meal. The images are quite vivid. Great job! ~Joseph

Date: 9/1/2008 9:38:00 AM

Clever double haiku , Michael .... Be careful , Mother Cat is NOT around .....

Date: 8/31/2008 5:38:00 PM

I like the active nature of this poem. Creative use of this short format. A person can't help but smile with the last line. Enjoyed this one. Karen

Date: 8/30/2008 4:55:00 PM

Great visual poetry and well written. Well done. Regards Heidie

Date: 8/30/2008 9:24:00 AM

Yes, and my two lazy cats could care less! This was cute Michael. Usually find one when the cold weather sets in. Yuck. : ) Love, Shar

Date: 8/30/2008 9:09:00 AM

Yup, those critters eat better than some - little stinkers! Made to survive! Great haiku set, love Kristin