Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Mickey Mouse

Cute little Mickey,
                                                   Shown on national T.V.
                                                      Adorned by many,
                                                      Loved by Minnie.
                
                                                     You act gracefully,
                                                   You make me happy,
                                                Before I sleep every day,
                                           I make sure you and I will play.

                                             You are my favorite mouse,
                                  Different designs you can see in our house,
                                            Can’t take my eyes off you,
                                    I always hug you when I’m feeling blue.


                                                Written by: Maria Paz
                                                    January 3, 2013
                                               For Leonora's Contest
                                                   2nd Place Winner

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Joseph May February 10, 2013 at 3:44 PM congrats on your win Maria

Joe Maverick February 10, 2013 at 10:12 AM Enjoyed your heart-warming winner for Leonoras contest Maria..)

Poet Destroyer A February 9, 2013 at 8:40 PM Hi Maria, stopping by to say hi, and check out all of Leonora's fun and fabulous contest Pooh and Disney tooooo winners*LOL :-) love your poem ... Good-night ~ LINDA "

Len Gasun February 9, 2013 at 9:27 AM Congratulations my dear friend Maria on your win and great entry in my “Disney Kids/Winnie and Mickey” poem writing contest. I extremely enjoyed reading your awesome poem/story. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

Vicky Tsiluma January 23, 2013 at 11:46 PM Beautifullly written Maria! I love how you've expressed the sentiments - very nice!

Joseph May January 15, 2013 at 9:11 PM nice write Maria...best wishes

Honestly J.T. January 8, 2013 at 7:16 PM yes. Walt Disney's greatest creation. Good poem - JH

Poet Destroyer A January 5, 2013 at 9:14 PM a cute entry...love it..pd Bukang Liwayway January 15, 2013 at 11:39 PM thanks PD :) Good day!!

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2013 at 9:44 AM Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this very creative work..It has such good flow to it..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara Bukang Liwayway January 5, 2013 at 10:26 AM thanks dear Sara :)

Len Gasun January 4, 2013 at 7:44 AM hmmmnnn....yes... yes... yes! :) thank u! big hugs, Leonora Bukang Liwayway January 5, 2013 at 10:25 AM (^_^) thanks dear Norie :) god bless you always...

Skat A January 3, 2013 at 10:22 PM cute, cute ~Luv*SKAT Bukang Liwayway January 5, 2013 at 10:21 AM so much thanks friend SKAT..Happy New Year! :)

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2013 at 12:02 PM sweet and cute!! Bukang Liwayway January 5, 2013 at 10:16 AM Thanks dear Andrea..:) Good day always.

Susan Simpkins January 3, 2013 at 10:46 AM cute Bukang Liwayway January 5, 2013 at 9:47 AM thanks susan :)

Jacob Cra January 3, 2013 at 9:34 AM Is this published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Or enter another one of your poems... they all seem really fantastic and creative! Wish you the best with your poetry no matter what you decide! :D:D:D:D:DD:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D hope you win leonora's contest! Bukang Liwayway January 3, 2013 at 9:38 AM wow!! thanks for a very nice compliments friend Jacob :) Happy New year!!