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9/9/2024 for Bite Size No90 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

Mice and Men

The best laid plans once were made
by mice and men, I'm afraid.
"Oh my God, what have we done?"
asked the somewhat larger one.  
"Human is as human does", 
said the little ball of fuzz.
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Agustin Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 11:52 PM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours, so wisdom-filled. God bless you.
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Thanks - I appreciate your kind words Beata
Rodgers Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Hello David, I really enjoyed reading your poem this morning and thought how insightful and a blend of humor. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments Daniel and glad you liked it! Sometimes, I can't help but show my bias for the non-human animal - lol!
Greenhough Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Very cute. I always enjoy your humor.
Crandall Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 8:19 PM
haha - thanks Hilda
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