Mgk

you appear here rhyming beard and weird 
eating oatmeal acting fierce 
here's your limelight here's your career 
here's a spliff and here's a beer 
and a magic trick where you disappear 
a rapping disaster passed a chance 
to topple the master and steal the stance 
six years of ideas captured in write 
yet rhymes don't appear and it's childlike 
syllable rhymes which aren't true but more near 
A's rhymed with E's insulting the ear 
and from a poetic perspective it's awfully clear 
your brain's only human when the pulse disappears 
flatlining blind at the peak of it's climb 
declining back down yet on the same line

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