Mettle and Stone

How I wish I had your courage
And could face life with unyielding faith
And the strength of your undying heart.

"Trial" is the testament of all you have known
Tried to overcome their doubt
Tried to give more when you'd given all
Tried to be what they thought you couldn't
Tried and became your very finest.

Metal and stone cannot match
Your tried and true mettle 
Or indomitable spirit
Or my admiration
Of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/7/2009 2:57:00 PM
The flow of the stream is never the same the next day, because it has moved on and that point has been passed. Like the water in the stream we too must flow onto the horizon to join with the sun and the moon in their setting and rising. You have the spirit, unleash it. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 7/7/2009 2:35:00 PM
I could feel your heart and soul in this whole poem! well done! Laura :)
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Date: 7/7/2009 11:54:00 AM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder. nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2009 4:31:00 AM
Very enjoyable reading Jane. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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