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Metronomic Heirloom

Written: April 08, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Morphing into an appealing landscape, gathered around a table embrace. In the connection of family mindscape. We find sanctuary in this precious place. It engulfs you and completes its task, a ghostly husk that is waxy and pale. Dreams that last, a disturbing mask. A table decorated with a phantom tale Heirloom, the pink hearts flap, In rhythm, they dance a poetic trap. A heart, still beating, with metronomic grace, twitching forks, dancing in the space. Melodies in the air, a symphony's prism. Their metallic bodies, alive with grace, In utopian harmony, they find their place. Never shall your children hear such schism In whispers gentle and voices clear, a secret kept, forever near, Hidden in the depths, so dear. Trusting even amid fear.

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Date: 4/11/2024 2:56:00 PM
SP, I'm thinking of a lot of past family dinners now. A lot of things were said and felt by us. Sometimes I wondered why people in the family would say certain things that were only hurtful. Very odd conversations.
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:12:00 AM
Ah dr sotto, as always you write so well, flowing in such eloquence with such depth! I always admire the way your rhymes are woven in such a captivating cadence. “ In the connection of family mindscape. We find sanctuary in this precious place. ” so true, and so well said, it is moments like that which are priceless, that stays as comfort in the landscape of memories, with family and loved ones! Your last lines really stand out for me! Melodies in the air, gracefully echoes through your poem! Pleasure always reading your work
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Date: 4/10/2024 1:28:00 AM
Great poem. You make rhyming so simple, something I cannot do easily. Plus the imagery that makes this poem so brilliant.
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Date: 4/9/2024 6:22:00 AM
dearest Sotto--I enjoyed your poem because it so beautifully expressed what's near and dear to my heart--family and the heirloom of memories. The first verse spoke volumes to me. "We find sanctuary in this precious place." Truly family can be a sanctuary and you've captured that wonderfully well. Your rhyme scheme flowed so easily I didn't even notice it, but I did find a certain calm in the rhythm of your poem. Grateful for your poetic voice and words today, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/9/2024 5:23:00 AM
In the connection of family mindscape-- We find sanctuary in this precious place---Well said my friend. We love to dwell in keepsake memories.
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Date: 4/9/2024 12:36:00 AM
Beautiful, your verse always flows off the tongue when I read it.
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Date: 4/8/2024 8:02:00 PM
I enjoyed reading you today- great flow and how good of you to share your heirlooms...
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