Meteors Shoot

meteors shoot
across the night sky - -
lovers hold hands

For Tirzah’s Shooting Stars contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Anish Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Intresting juxtaposistion here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
K. Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 2:16 AM
Beautiful and romantic haiku, jack! Lucky lovers...and just dropping by to say hi and thank you for dropping by!I see this won something, so congrats to you!
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 2:37 PM
((()))!Clap! Congrats on your great work winning..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 10:01 PM
congrats luv on a wonderful win.. anther I dud not enter.. oh slipping.. due to my hands dilemma ..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 11:32 AM
Many congratulations on your win Jack , i like this one xx
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 4:26 AM
congrats Jack, awesome poem. this winner.
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:35 AM
Jack, big congrats on your win...David
Arowolo Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 12:16 AM
Beautiful piece,Jack...Great job..Congrats on your win...
Conway Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Congrats on your 7th place win in my contest!~Titzah!
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 12:11 AM
Enjoyed reading this morning Jack, well done."
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 12:51 PM
Ahhh!..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 5:49 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poem this morning and wish you the best in the contest Jack. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 9:39 PM
again, you nailed it with a tiny form.Love how you did your entry, Jack, perfecto.
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August 16, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Ahhh! So romantic..Winner for sure..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Something happened to my Avatiar...Sara Kendrick
Loving Iii Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 3:12 PM
and make a wish
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:47 PM
...and make wishes of their future! What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed this perfect Haiku Jack! You've done magnificently! Great Work!!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:40 PM
oh a picture of lovers bliss among those stars Jack luv.. thankxx for all your lovely cards and comments.. good luck too.. am on slow slow heal and may need carpel tunne3l on both hands now.. find out later tonight.. oh..
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