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Meteors Shoot

meteors shoot
across the night sky - -
lovers hold hands

For Tirzah’s Shooting Stars contest

naturehaiku

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/26/2012 10:06:00 AM

Intresting juxtaposistion here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/26/2012 2:16:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic haiku, jack! Lucky lovers...and just dropping by to say hi and thank you for dropping by!I see this won something, so congrats to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2012 2:37:00 PM

((()))!Clap! Congrats on your great work winning..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2012 10:01:00 PM

congrats luv on a wonderful win.. anther I dud not enter.. oh slipping.. due to my hands dilemma ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/21/2012 11:32:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Jack , i like this one xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2012 4:26:00 AM

congrats Jack, awesome poem. this winner.

David Williams

Date: 8/21/2012 3:35:00 AM

Jack, big congrats on your win...David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/21/2012 12:16:00 AM

Beautiful piece,Jack...Great job..Congrats on your win...

Tirzah Conway

Date: 8/20/2012 2:04:00 PM

Congrats on your 7th place win in my contest!~Titzah!

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/20/2012 12:11:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this morning Jack, well done."

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2012 12:51:00 PM

Ahhh!..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 5:49:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your poem this morning and wish you the best in the contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2012 9:39:00 PM

again, you nailed it with a tiny form.Love how you did your entry, Jack, perfecto.

Date: 8/16/2012 3:56:00 PM

Ahhh! So romantic..Winner for sure..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/16/2012 3:58:00 PM

Something happened to my Avatiar...Sara Kendrick

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/16/2012 3:12:00 PM

and make a wish

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2012 1:47:00 PM

...and make wishes of their future! What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed this perfect Haiku Jack! You've done magnificently! Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2012 1:40:00 PM

oh a picture of lovers bliss among those stars Jack luv.. thankxx for all your lovely cards and comments.. good luck too.. am on slow slow heal and may need carpel tunne3l on both hands now.. find out later tonight.. oh..

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