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meteors shoot across the night sky - - lovers hold hands For Tirzah’s Shooting Stars contest

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Date: 8/26/2012 10:06:00 AM
Intresting juxtaposistion here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic haiku, jack! Lucky lovers...and just dropping by to say hi and thank you for dropping by!I see this won something, so congrats to you!
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Date: 8/23/2012 2:37:00 PM
((()))!Clap! Congrats on your great work winning..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2012 10:01:00 PM
congrats luv on a wonderful win.. anther I dud not enter.. oh slipping.. due to my hands dilemma ..
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:32:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Jack , i like this one xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2012 4:26:00 AM
congrats Jack, awesome poem. this winner.
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:35:00 AM
Jack, big congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/21/2012 12:16:00 AM
Beautiful piece,Jack...Great job..Congrats on your win...
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:04:00 PM
Congrats on your 7th place win in my contest!~Titzah!
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Date: 8/20/2012 12:11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this morning Jack, well done."
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Date: 8/19/2012 12:51:00 PM
Ahhh!..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/17/2012 5:49:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poem this morning and wish you the best in the contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2012 9:39:00 PM
again, you nailed it with a tiny form.Love how you did your entry, Jack, perfecto.
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Date: 8/16/2012 3:56:00 PM
Ahhh! So romantic..Winner for sure..Sara
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Date: 8/16/2012 3:58:00 PM
Something happened to my Avatiar...Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/16/2012 3:12:00 PM
and make a wish
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:47:00 PM
...and make wishes of their future! What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed this perfect Haiku Jack! You've done magnificently! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:40:00 PM
oh a picture of lovers bliss among those stars Jack luv.. thankxx for all your lovely cards and comments.. good luck too.. am on slow slow heal and may need carpel tunne3l on both hands now.. find out later tonight.. oh..
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