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Meteorite

It's too dark, and meek, and cloudy in my mind In my mind.. I'm hoping for some rain all the time, all the time All the time, I'm looking for the sun.. to shine, to shine Sun to shine.. into-o-o a de-e-ep blue sky-ii-i Ii-i-i can't wait to join the stars in the night, in the night In the night, I'll walk you side by side as your guide, your guide As your guide, as your light, as your meteorite that you wish on... to make you feel like everything's all right : )

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Date: 9/4/2024 10:07:00 AM
If you care to have a listen, there is an old phone recording of this song from the day i wrote it. I made my own sweet and simple lyric music video for it as well. You can type in YouTube "Meteorite Jorge Tuazon" or copy/paste this link I hope you enjoy my words either which way!:) https://youtu.be/3tLw3scM8dM?si=3D5w7LUwLgZcHT-9
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Date: 9/4/2024 6:14:00 AM
Interesting form Jorge. Who hasn't witnessed the beauty of a shooting star? Your metaphor is well taken
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Date: 9/4/2024 6:18:00 AM
Sincerely, thank you for the feedback!:)

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