Notes About The Poem

image from topmita.com

poem submitted to "Black Cat Moan by Glenn Huges" poetry contest, Robert James Liguori, sponsor 7/3/2026

METAPHORICAL FIRE

I walked into a fire  
that wasn’t made of flame,  
a blaze of doubt and longing  
that called me by my name.  

It rose from buried questions,  
from truths I tried to hide,  
from all the dreams I’d quieted  
to keep the peace inside.  

Its heat was forged of choices,  
of paths I didn’t take,  
of moments when my courage  
fell silent for my sake.  

The sparks were old assumptions,  
the smoke was worn-out fear,  
and every crackling ember  
said, You’re meant to stand right here.  

I felt it burn around me,  
yet nothing turned to ash;  
instead the fire revealed me  
in one bright, searing flash.  

It stripped away the shadows,  
the stories I outgrew,  
and left me with a fierceness  
I never knew I knew.  

For metaphorical fire  
does not arrive to break~  
it comes to heal, to melt the boundaries  
we never meant to make.  

And when its heat has softened  
the walls we built in vain,  
with faith we step out of the furnace  
more whole than we remain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hind Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 10:32 PM
"with faith we step out of the furnace more whole than we remain." !!
Maverick Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Really great stuff Sara..Its got whimsy And a message for the reader.' All blessings.)
Maverick Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Really great stuff Sara..Its got whimsy And a message for the reader.' All blessings.)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace