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Image result for pictures of psychopath at prey The quoted line is from Sara Etgen Baker.

Metaphor Treasure Hunt

Sara Etgen Baker's poem, "The Habitual Sky"

"Midnight's inkwell spills across the city's throat"
Psychopath comes alive, seeks body of one he smote

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Howard Kerr

November 11, 2025 at 1:26 AM

Sara, A very vivid, detailed interpretation of this contest’s challenge. You have this gift for apt word selection Howard

Sara Kendrick

November 11, 2025 at 5:29 AM

Why, thank you, Howard. Your comments are very elevating. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

November 10, 2025 at 5:47 PM

wow, this poem is wonderful.....thanks for using a line from one of my poems....it fit right in. best wishes, Sara K, with this contest entry, hugs & blessings, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

November 11, 2025 at 5:28 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate you saying it is fine to use it. I was worried about the change from the way in which you used it to the pathological. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

November 10, 2025 at 11:42 AM

I enjoyed reading your write with a great picture. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............

Sara Kendrick

November 10, 2025 at 12:26 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit and kind review. It feels like a blustery late fall day today, in fact, more like early winter. We had a lot of things to handle pertaining to my husband's death. Sara K

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