Metaphor Treasure Hunt

The third one, Autumn, plods through leaves and nearly takes a Fall,
then passes off to Winter, who proceeds at such a crawl -

Inspired by, The Relay Race, by John Watts [2020]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Really cool. Love this
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, I sent you an email, hope to submit, Aloha.
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