Metaphor

Walking on nothing.
Do you think you could show me,
How ive come this far?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Interesting write in this one. Keep writing the magical verse. Sara
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