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Metamorphosis

chrysalis of change pupating ~ outgrown old pals time to seek new mates Bite Size Poem no7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Syllable counter PS 5/7/5 14/06/2021

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Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 8/21/2021 8:11:00 AM

thought provoking haiku David... there is a time for everything... Congratulations on you win !

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/21/2021 8:33:00 AM

Thank you Paris, I was trying to express how our own life and growth, can be similar to natures metamorphosis, we all can change hopefully for the better, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/21/2021 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Enjoy your win with blessings.............

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/21/2021 12:02:00 PM

Heya Paula, thank you for stopping by, indeed it’s a pretty succinct write, sometimes I feel a few words say so much more, and saves me blabbing on, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/15/2021 10:48:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku David, it's amazing how you can put such great meanings in just a few syllables. Withered old friends going through a transition time to seek new relationships.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/15/2021 11:55:00 AM

Hello Lasaad, this one covers a lot of areas about life changing in general, so whichever one the reader finds relevant, is indeed the idea behind the haiku cheers David