David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

Metamorphosis

chrysalis of change
    pupating ~ outgrown old pals
        time to seek new mates


Bite Size Poem no7 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Syllable counter PS 5/7/5
14/06/2021

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Paris-Maree Boreham August 21, 2021 at 8:11 AM thought provoking haiku David... there is a time for everything... Congratulations on you win ! David Kavanagh August 21, 2021 at 8:33 AM Thank you Paris, I was trying to express how our own life and growth, can be similar to natures metamorphosis, we all can change hopefully for the better, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith June 21, 2021 at 11:16 AM Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Enjoy your win with blessings............. David Kavanagh June 21, 2021 at 12:02 PM Heya Paula, thank you for stopping by, indeed it’s a pretty succinct write, sometimes I feel a few words say so much more, and saves me blabbing on, cheers David

Sotto Poet June 15, 2021 at 10:48 AM Wonderful Haiku David, it's amazing how you can put such great meanings in just a few syllables. Withered old friends going through a transition time to seek new relationships. David Kavanagh June 15, 2021 at 11:55 AM Hello Lasaad, this one covers a lot of areas about life changing in general, so whichever one the reader finds relevant, is indeed the idea behind the haiku cheers David

Gary Radice June 15, 2021 at 5:38 AM Loved this! You've obviously changed David. :) David Kavanagh June 15, 2021 at 5:55 AM Ha yeah Gary, I had a darker version yesterday, but then had a change of heart, hopefully it can last for a while, cheers David

Alexis Y. June 14, 2021 at 3:49 PM WoW! David, Good haiku with a good message. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis David Kavanagh June 15, 2021 at 2:15 AM Thank you Alexis, metamorphosis quite a remarkable, complex cycle of creation, cheers David

Jan Allison June 14, 2021 at 2:50 PM great haiku David:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh June 14, 2021 at 3:04 PM Thank you Jan, we never see it coming, somehow just happens, cheers David