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Metamorphosis

Succulent showers of golden morning dew bathed my soft coos in pearly rose hue the day I unveiled from my pretty petals butterflies singing with naughty nettles. A blooming bud smiling in my umpteenth hours daddy's glorious girl in serenade of flowers warm whispers of lavender lullabies with stars quintessential quilt of fireflies from jars. Born to bring bliss in a smoldering world ferocious fire of fallacies at us hurled Oh daddy! Courageously cocooned me to death melting mellows for a baby till last breath. Tenebrous thorns surrounded my scarred shadows perhaps protected my petals in mourning meadows living legend of beauty behind a tenacious thorn I awaited aurora of auspicious showers to be reborn. Whimpering willow wails on a whispering dark night onlooking opalescent sprinkles from my petals bright ecstatic effervescence my scarred thorns now release sumptuous solace of daddy's promise in soothing breeze. July 8, 2020 The Flower, The Thorn Or Both Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke ~Premiere Contest Winner: 2nd Place

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P.M. Richter

Date: 7/17/2020 1:00:00 PM

Beautifully penned ~ truly a metamorphosis :)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:31:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind wishes :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/13/2020 12:50:00 PM

This is very lovely Aditi. Congratulations on your second place win! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:05:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes and blessings Connie. Much love :)

John Watt

Date: 7/12/2020 7:43:00 PM

I would love to observe how you write such beauties as this, Aditi, the fantastic phrasing, voluptuous vocabulary, the alluring alliterations. I'd love to ask how you come up with such sumptuous sounding sentiments and learn from your amazing storehouse of poetic creativity. My favorite phrase was "ferocious fire of fallacies". Please keep writing and inspiring, these poems are just exceptional. Congratulations on your win, my friend. Blessings ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for taking such keen interest in my muse dear friend. It is always an honour to share my thoughts with you and hear yours. I believe I go with the flow of my emotions. Thank you for your continuous support and encouragement. Blessings :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 7:33:00 PM

Beautifully amazing choice of words blending righteously, Aditi, my compliments for your efforts and deserving win -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:57:00 AM

Glad you loved my words William. Thank you for your generous appreciation my friend. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2020 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen was working overtime. Wonderful. Enjoy your win and day with hugs...............

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:57:00 AM

I am always thankful for your gracious appreciation Paula. Have a good day. Much love :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/12/2020 4:01:00 AM

Fantabulous write Aditi...Congrats!! on your win dear friend...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:56:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious appreciation WW :) Much love!

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/12/2020 1:13:00 AM

Stunning imagery dear Aditi...CONGRATULATIONS!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:56:00 AM

Thank you for such kind words my friend. Much love :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2020 11:46:00 PM

Touching a depth of deep emotion, Aditi. So beautifully expressed through so many poetic elements. Contratulations on your winning placement. Hugs and love.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:55:00 AM

I am really honoured by your kind appreciation Sam! Glad you loved it. Thank you for visiting and encouraging. Blessings and love :)

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 7/11/2020 7:26:00 PM

This is lovely. Wonderful images and congratulations on your high placement.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:54:00 AM

Thank you for such beautiful appreciation Janis. Love :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/11/2020 6:19:00 PM

Congrats on your second place win!;)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes Brenda. Love :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/10/2020 4:04:00 PM

The alliteration was terrifically done, but so was the romantic poetic imagery. Well penned!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 7:59:00 AM

Glad you loved it Caren. Thank you! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2020 8:16:00 PM

This is gorgeous, Aditi!!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/9/2020 8:24:00 AM

The flower and the thorn--every life has both. Such a beautiful, descriptive, thought-provoking poem, Aditi! Janice

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/9/2020 9:45:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation Janice. Blessings and love :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2020 10:47:00 PM

The alliteration brings out the best in your alluring rhyme --- and there sure is a 'lot of best' to bring out! Wonderfully penned, Aditi! Blessings, Gershon

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/9/2020 1:05:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Gershon! Your uplifting words inspire me to keep writing :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/8/2020 1:50:00 PM

Beautiful verse Aditi, this will be at the top of the winners list I'm sure. Tom

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/8/2020 1:52:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation Tom. Blessings :)