Metal Sky

Metal sky don't cry for me I'll soon be stepping over you to eternal blue Your warm sunshine on my face serene comfort's last embrace Home at last my home on high breaking thru you metal sky

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Moses Gava

Date: 8/28/2018 3:22:00 AM

I love the connection of words there...i wish i will be a complex poet like you one day.

Pete Yuhas

Date: 4/6/2017 3:40:00 PM

Nice write Gayle Rodd, thanks for sharing.

Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/7/2017 5:42:00 AM

Thank You, Pete

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/4/2017 4:51:00 PM

Surreal and lovely, Gayle!

Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/4/2017 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/4/2017 4:23:00 PM

Very cool, this is abstract and really made me think of the scene you were creating. I like that "metal sky". Really nicely done Gayle.

Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/4/2017 5:41:00 PM

Thank you. This was actually going to be the title of my poetry book.