Gayle Rodd Poet Rhyme

Metal Sky

Metal sky 
don't cry for me
I'll soon be stepping over you
to eternal blue
Your warm sunshine 
on my face
serene comfort's last embrace
Home at last 
my home on high
breaking thru you
metal sky

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Moses Gava August 28, 2018 at 3:22 AM I love the connection of words there...i wish i will be a complex poet like you one day.

Pete Yuhas April 6, 2017 at 3:40 PM Nice write Gayle Rodd, thanks for sharing. Gayle Rodd April 7, 2017 at 5:42 AM Thank You, Pete

Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2017 at 4:51 PM Surreal and lovely, Gayle! Gayle Rodd April 4, 2017 at 5:40 PM Thank you Kim :)

Chris Green April 4, 2017 at 4:23 PM Very cool, this is abstract and really made me think of the scene you were creating. I like that "metal sky". Really nicely done Gayle. Gayle Rodd April 4, 2017 at 5:41 PM Thank you. This was actually going to be the title of my poetry book.