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Messieurs Temple of Life

This is a Messieurs Temple of high rank that disallows entry. Here comes disturbance and confusion to dissuade at the door. We will run fast, lock the entrance, and shout; now all is done. __________________________________________________| Verlena S. Walker Contest Name: SIJO IN A TEMPLE [16-16-14) Penned on May 01, 2014!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:49:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Verlena. Cool ending!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/15/2014 10:00:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for your supportive remarks. I visit you recently and enjoyed reading several of your poems. You roc... Verlena :0))s.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 1:30:00 PM

VERLENA , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/13/2014 1:09:00 PM

this is strong and chilling...wonderful imagery and metaphor for the truth of reality and life, verlena... your win in my contest is my pleasure.. congrats and huggs

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/13/2014 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Nette for supporting my Poetry via your contest. Verlena :0))s.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/13/2014 6:02:00 AM

Wonderful write Verlena ! worth a great win really,, congrats !

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/13/2014 12:11:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Upma for your supportive words. Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/12/2014 9:12:00 PM

Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/12/2014 9:20:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Ram for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Paul Callus

Date: 5/12/2014 3:32:00 PM

Very interesting topic and write. Congrats on win, Verlena.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/12/2014 4:14:00 PM

Thanks Paul for your supportive remarks. I know how Sijo now. LOL. Verlena

Lisa Lee

Date: 5/12/2014 2:27:00 PM

Awesome Write, Verlena! Congratulations, on your win!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/12/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thank Lisa for your congratulations and your supportive remarks. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 12:38:00 PM

I am not familiar with this form. Interesting poem, is it women that are disallowed to enter the temple?

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/2/2014 12:52:00 PM

No, it is those that brings confusion and disturbance that is disallowed to enter the temple... Women are welcome via invitation. Men are there always... Verlena :0))s.