Verlena S. Walker Poet Sijo

Messieurs Temple of Life

This is a Messieurs Temple of high rank that disallows entry.
Here comes disturbance and confusion to dissuade at the door.
We will run fast, lock the entrance, and shout; now all is done.
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Verlena S. Walker
Contest Name: 	SIJO IN A TEMPLE [16-16-14)
Penned on May 01, 2014!

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Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2014 at 9:49 PM Congrats for your win, Verlena. Cool ending!! Verlena S. Walker May 15, 2014 at 10:00 PM Thanks Andrea for your supportive remarks. I visit you recently and enjoyed reading several of your poems. You roc... Verlena :0))s.

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2014 at 1:30 PM VERLENA , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2014 at 1:09 PM this is strong and chilling...wonderful imagery and metaphor for the truth of reality and life, verlena... your win in my contest is my pleasure.. congrats and huggs Verlena S. Walker May 13, 2014 at 1:26 PM Thanks Nette for supporting my Poetry via your contest. Verlena :0))s.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 13, 2014 at 6:02 AM Wonderful write Verlena ! worth a great win really,, congrats ! Verlena S. Walker May 13, 2014 at 12:11 PM Thanks Dr. Upma for your supportive words. Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta May 12, 2014 at 9:12 PM Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Verlena Verlena S. Walker May 12, 2014 at 9:20 PM Thanks Dr. Ram for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Paul Callus May 12, 2014 at 3:32 PM Very interesting topic and write. Congrats on win, Verlena. Verlena S. Walker May 12, 2014 at 4:14 PM Thanks Paul for your supportive remarks. I know how Sijo now. LOL. Verlena

Lisa Lee May 12, 2014 at 2:27 PM Awesome Write, Verlena! Congratulations, on your win! Verlena S. Walker May 12, 2014 at 4:15 PM Thank Lisa for your congratulations and your supportive remarks. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2014 at 12:38 PM I am not familiar with this form. Interesting poem, is it women that are disallowed to enter the temple? Verlena S. Walker May 2, 2014 at 12:52 PM No, it is those that brings confusion and disturbance that is disallowed to enter the temple... Women are welcome via invitation. Men are there always... Verlena :0))s.