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I sent a message on a pristine cloud passing by Hoping it won’t disperse in miles across the sky Then, I heard you speak of color illuminated by the sun I knew it was received with all the happiness and fun Distance that feels vacant isn’t all it is said to be Feelings reside in heart, dreams swept by wind to see It is the knowing, like the constant air we breathe Musical notes that always find a way to weave Thoughts and emotions in melody that keeps on playing Reigniting warm feelings that will always be staying Far or near through storms and weather torn fear Turbulent skies pass through, until they open up clear In the silence of the last fallen raindrops to the ground It is always amazing what can be seen to be found Pristine clouds float with change into colors that shine In a widespread open sky that is always yours and mine Heidi Sands 10/29/17

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Date: 10/30/2017 1:46:00 PM
I am feeling so much hope from your beautiful words and I believe in those messages! Lovely. xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 8:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike. I am happy this can bring hope to the reader :)
Date: 10/30/2017 5:39:00 AM
Yes, the open skies are certainly expressed perfectly for my wife and I, just like how you have presented for you and yours! I really loved reading this illustrious poem here this morning! You have delighted me by your incredibly spacious piece my friend! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/30/2017 11:59:00 AM
Hi Russell. Thanks so much. We are out of electricity here. I dont have much time. Talk soon. I appreciate your comment and i am glad you and your wife enjoyed this :)
Date: 10/29/2017 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful write Heidi..enjoyed
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/29/2017 5:22:00 PM
Lovely message on a cloud--beautiful lines of scenery and feelings!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay. I appreciate your feedback as always :)
Date: 10/29/2017 3:29:00 PM
- I love this poem, Heidi - Wonderful to read :) - I often write a message through the clouds and hope they blow the right path :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2017 3:48:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine ! :) Keep watching those clouds :)
Date: 10/29/2017 2:17:00 PM
Sweet ending... some great lines in this poem..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/29/2017 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Silent one. Also, thank you for leading me to Becca's blog and commenting on it. :) I appreciate your visit.
Date: 10/29/2017 12:44:00 PM
The last two lines are beautiful ... Enjoyed reading the poem ...
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Date: 10/29/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Probir ! I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/29/2017 12:39:00 PM
Lovely poem...You concluded perfectly... " An open sky that is always yours and mine"
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Date: 10/29/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Arturo for your visit to this an kind comment. Yes, the sky is ours :)

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