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Message On a Cloud

I sent a message on a pristine cloud passing by
Hoping it won’t disperse in miles across the sky
Then, I heard you speak of color illuminated by the sun
I knew it was received with all the happiness and fun

Distance that feels vacant isn’t all it is said to be
Feelings reside in heart, dreams swept by wind to see
It is the knowing, like the constant air we breathe
Musical notes that always find a way to weave

Thoughts and emotions in melody that keeps on playing
Reigniting warm feelings that will always be staying
Far or near through storms and weather torn fear
Turbulent skies pass through, until they open up clear

In the silence of the last fallen raindrops to the ground
It is always amazing what can be seen to be found
Pristine clouds float with change into colors that shine
In a widespread open sky that is always yours and mine

Heidi Sands

10/29/17
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Gentile Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 1:46 PM
I am feeling so much hope from your beautiful words and I believe in those messages! Lovely. xxoo
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Thank you so much Mike. I am happy this can bring hope to the reader :)
Sivey Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:39 AM
Yes, the open skies are certainly expressed perfectly for my wife and I, just like how you have presented for you and yours! I really loved reading this illustrious poem here this morning! You have delighted me by your incredibly spacious piece my friend! What a beautiful poem, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 11:59 AM
Hi Russell. Thanks so much. We are out of electricity here. I dont have much time. Talk soon. I appreciate your comment and i am glad you and your wife enjoyed this :)
May Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Beautiful write Heidi..enjoyed
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:35 PM
Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Lovely message on a cloud--beautiful lines of scenery and feelings!
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Thanks so much Vijay. I appreciate your feedback as always :)
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 3:29 PM
- I love this poem, Heidi - Wonderful to read :) - I often write a message through the clouds and hope they blow the right path :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Thank you Sunshine ! :) Keep watching those clouds :)
One Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Sweet ending... some great lines in this poem..
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Silent one. Also, thank you for leading me to Becca's blog and commenting on it. :) I appreciate your visit.
Gupta Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 12:44 PM
The last two lines are beautiful ... Enjoyed reading the poem ...
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 1:29 PM
Thank you Probir ! I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Michael Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 12:39 PM
Lovely poem...You concluded perfectly... " An open sky that is always yours and mine"
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Thank you Arturo for your visit to this an kind comment. Yes, the sky is ours :)
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