Message In the Bottle

He wonders why she left him
As he stumbles to the bed
He just needed to take a minute
Some time, to clear his head

When he got home, her clothes were gone
No note was ever found
She didn't even say goodbye
She didn't even make a sound

Married now for fifteen years
And she threw it all away
He just didn't understand it
How could she leave this way?

He opens another bottle
And takes him a couple sips
He numbs the pain like everyday
As the whiskey crosses his lips

He says, "Why didn't she leave a message?"
His head too cloudy to think
"I didn't do anything wrong", he says
And then takes another drink

The message was in the bottle 
He was just to blind to see
She begged him to stop drinking
But it wasn't meant to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Happens too often, my friend. Well written. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 8:09 PM
An ongoing issue in the World today Larry and u have penned it so profoundly my friend.. enjoyed tonight with luv..
Roberts Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 11:00 AM
great piece, relates to so many lives
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